First Draft: Feedback

                                                           I showed my peers the first draft and the movie and they had some things to say about it. Number 1, the scene on the bench was bad which I admittedly agreed with. They also wanted to see more fights because it's a boxing movie and for a boxing movie it has like 2 seconds of fighting. The film logo was also bad according to them, it looked more like a horror film than a boxing one. Lastly it was too dramatic, there was dramatic music and sad dialogue which was seen as overly dramatic and annoying as opposed to it being effective. My team and I will take note for the 2nd draft of the film.